Is this a good prologue?Best Answer 10 points.?

I like the general idea, but your presentation and grammar are terrible. There are a few parts in which she breaks from her character as a 18th century woman (in that time, they did not use the slang "a ton" and "liked me" to describe affection) Several times, you elaborate unnecessarily, which shows you are trying much to hard to write like an 18th century woman (example: Some things will be hard for me to write to you because they still haunt me at this very moment I am writing this, but as a new author of my own biography I shall tell you).